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You are my,
Afternoon moon,
My evening sun.
You would make me swoon,
If I weren't supposed to be the manly one.

You are the,
Relentless glow,
That lights my darkest hour,
You are always with me,
You're my all season flower.

You aren't just,
My lover,
My sweetheart,
But my best friend,
My other half.

You are everything,
I need say no more.
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Author's Comments

I've spent most of the day with her, and I thought this up on the way home, tis a miracle I remembered the half of it lol.

Enjoy

xx

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:iconrenegade-angel23:
Dude! I love coming to read your poetry Seriously. You always impress!
Love this that first verse just ROCKED.

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I reject your reality and substitute my own - Adam - Mythbusters
:iconnikko2390:
Lol, thanks :-)
I was going to call it Afternoon Moon, but i decided on You Are... because it's almost like the chorus of the poem if you get me lol.

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"If you could see everything, what would you do?"
"Learn to close my eyes"
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:iconxensoleillex:
this is wonderful and makes me so wistful lol.

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Follow the yellow brick road...[link] <3

...and if they told you wolverines made good housepets would you believe them then? ~John Hughes
:iconrenegade-angel23:
Yeah I do. The title works perfectly!

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I reject your reality and substitute my own - Adam - Mythbusters
:iconkatielovestom:
aw i love your poetry ^^ well done :)

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How on earth are you ever going to explain in terms of chemistry and physics so important a biological phenomenon as first love?
- Albert Einstein

I Love You :)
:icononandute:
once again, great job. this one is really good!
:iconnikko2390:
your welcome, I'm glad you like :-)

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"If you could see everything, what would you do?"
"Learn to close my eyes"
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:iconnikko2390:
Thankies :-)

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"If you could see everything, what would you do?"
"Learn to close my eyes"
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:iconnikko2390:
Lol, twas the desired effect, so I'm glad :-)
Thanks :-)

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"If you could see everything, what would you do?"
"Learn to close my eyes"
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